1 雅思 大作文高分怎么寫
在雅思寫作中 ， 一切的寫作技巧都不如對(duì)寫作的細(xì)節(jié)把握 。在平時(shí)的寫作練習(xí)中 ， 考生可以根據(jù)雅思寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)來(lái)衡量自己的寫作水平 ， 下面是小編搜集整理的關(guān)于雅思大作文高分怎么寫的資料 ， 歡迎查閱 。


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一：拒絕無(wú)謂的單詞和詞組
1.一些不必要的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息 ， 完全可以被刪掉 。
比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion 。
這句話當(dāng)中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都顯得多余 。完全可以去掉 。改為：
【雅思高分范文 雅思高分寫作范文】Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents 。
2.替換無(wú)聊的表達(dá) ， 故意寫出復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)難句 ， 但是讓整個(gè)句子顯得特別冗長(zhǎng) ， 其實(shí)并不會(huì)給你的雅思作文加分 。
例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time 。
“due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子 ， 可以替換 ， 簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now 。
二：拒絕重復(fù)詞匯和表達(dá)
1.雅思寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中有一點(diǎn)：豐富性 。很多考生做不到在寫作中使用更豐富的詞匯和表達(dá) ， 也就與高分失之交臂 。有的時(shí)候雖然詞匯沒(méi)有重復(fù) ， 但意思卻有重復(fù) 。這時(shí)候可以做一些簡(jiǎn)化的工作 。
例如下面這個(gè)例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size 。
large對(duì)一個(gè)farm來(lái)說(shuō)就是size方面的large ， 所以in size可以去掉 ， 改為：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large 。
更簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)方式為：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm 。
2.有時(shí)一個(gè)詞組可以用一個(gè)更簡(jiǎn)單的單詞來(lái)替換
例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm 。
這里的over and over again就可以改為repeatedly ， 顯得更為簡(jiǎn)潔：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm 。
2雅思寫作怎樣才能有深度
有新意的表達(dá)離不開(kāi)辭藻的堆砌 ， 不是說(shuō)讓你將一些新奇的詞語(yǔ)一股腦兒的全部用上 ， 而是在適當(dāng)?shù)臅r(shí)候用有新意的詞語(yǔ)會(huì)讓閱卷人有眼前一亮的感覺(jué) 。
新鮮的詞語(yǔ)哪里來(lái)?當(dāng)然是積累了 ， 單詞一直都是考雅思的考生們必過(guò)的關(guān)卡 ， 畢竟“包里有糧 ， 心里不慌” 。
你能夠?qū)⒏咧械脑~匯量和大學(xué)的詞匯量全部掌握 ， 大概4000-5000個(gè)詞左右 ， 基本寫作也是沒(méi)有什么問(wèn)題了 。
除了基礎(chǔ)單詞的掌握外 ， 我們?cè)趯懽鞯臅r(shí)候要運(yùn)用一些“小心機(jī)” 。
一是學(xué)會(huì)變換詞性 ， 比如說(shuō) “fluctuate” ， “fluctuation” 和“fluctuating” ， 我們的考生就會(huì)認(rèn)為是同一個(gè)詞 ， 都表示波動(dòng)、起伏 。但是在考官眼里 ， 這是三個(gè)詞 。
它們雖然表達(dá)同樣的意思 ， 但是分別是用了動(dòng)詞、名詞、形容詞 ， 是不同的詞!所以 ， 這是一個(gè)擴(kuò)充詞匯量的突破口 ， 在我們?cè)性~匯的基礎(chǔ)上 ， 進(jìn)行詞性的變換 。
二是學(xué)會(huì)反義詞的應(yīng)用 ， 比如A商品比B商品好用 ， 也可以說(shuō)成B商品沒(méi)有A商品好用 ， 這樣的逆向思維 ， 會(huì)讓人多花時(shí)間揣摩 。
三是同義詞的替換 。比如Oppose to = object to = against ， Claim = state = assert = argue 。一些平常詞用多了就沒(méi)有新意了 ， 相反用同義詞去替換會(huì)讓人覺(jué)得你是一個(gè)有“水準(zhǔn)”的考生 。
3雅思寫作大作文練習(xí)題
1 Modern technology has made it possible for people to view exhibitions at home so museums and art galleries will disappear soon. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2 Education is increasingly important for a nation. Some people think the government should decide what students study in university. Others think students should study what they prefer. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
3 Some people think the government should stop putting money in art programs and put the money in more important fields such as sports facilities, medical care or national defense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


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4. Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problem of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree?
5 The government is responsible for protecting a nation’s cultural identity. Thus, some people believe new buildings should be built in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
6 People who move to a new country should accept the new culture as their own. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
7. Many languages are dying out every r. Some people think that our lives will be simpler with fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
8.Some people believe that university students should study science, other thinks that they should study what their heart desires. Discuss, what is your opinion?
9 Some governments spend vast sums of money on self-defense. Some people think they should spend the money on reducing poverty and other disadvantages rather than on weapons. To what extent do you agree?
10 Some people think zoos should be closed because they are cruel to animals. To what extent do you agree?